When i’m looking for global revisions I like to think about the ideas the writing is trying to explain and if they are making sense. In my peer reviewed first paper I mentioned that if they are trying to talk about the idea of a false self that they should expand more in the first paragraph about what a false self truly is. Looking back I could have explained more about what I meant or given her ideas on how to expand the concept some more and give her a direction she could possible go in. For local revisions I haven’t done much with because I myself cant find sentence mistakes or little things involved with writing. I normally focus on global revisions because I can see where things don’t make sense or needs more information. I think overall as English has proceeded I got better at giving more specific comments and ideas to help the writer improve their writing.
