Learning Outcome 5/6 ~ MLA + Errors

Comment on what your paper shows about your ability to cite sources using MLA guidelines.  What are you working on and what have you improved?

For MLA citations im working on making sure the names of authors are in the correct order. Sometimes I mixed up like emerging by putting the author of the book first and the author of the article section second when it should be flipped. I have improved on making sure it is in alphabetical order and that all the information we are citing is in the correct order. I have also learned how to cite a TED talk correctly.

 

Comment on what your paper shows about your ability to make local revisions.  What are you working on and what have you improved?  Be specific.

With local revisions i’m working on sentence structure and making sure I have complete sentences. Sometimes I don’t put a subject then a verb and cut the sentence to short. Im also working on commas and making sure i’m using them correctly and not just putting them in random spots where they don’t make sense. Then for improvements my paragraphs themselves have been a lot better structured. In stead of having choppy paragraphs that don’t flow with one another I started adding transitions that make sense and are able to make the paper one full complete idea.

 

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